Vijaya Sundaram

Poet, Musician, Teacher, and Amateur Visual Artist

FOUR Limericks – Not My Forte, but Hey!

I have, I confess, NEVER once tried a limerick.  I know some people who’re very good at it, and are funny to boot.  I tried to be funny, but alas, ’twas not to be!  Still, I had a lot of fun making these up.  I DO like a challenge.  Today’s challenge was to write a limerick about a flaw, using enjambment.  Well … I know I did not achieve all three in the first one, so, stubbornly, I went and tried it again.  And again.  And again. Now, I’m done.  If I am to improve, I should read more limericks.  I shall do so, but not forthwith!

This Limerick!

©Oct. 7th, 2015

By Vijaya Sundaram

There’s a form of versing I know

Which doesn’t come quite in a flow

It’s, just as you guessed,

My lim’rick, depressed,

Sloth-like, it moves oh, so slow!

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Bad Boy

©Oct. 7th, 2015

By Vijaya Sundaram

There are those who might call you a fool,

Say you’re wasting their time at school

It sure would be nice

If you took their advice

But that would mean being too cool.

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Imaginary Bear

©Oct. 7th, 2015

By Vijaya Sundaram

There was a young puppy today

Who went to the woods to play

He saw a big bear who

Caused quite a scare; You-

Know-Who went yelping away.

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Rumpelstiltskin

©Oct. 7th, 2015

By Vijaya Sundaram

There once was a lovely young maiden

 Whose king shut the door; she stayed in

With help, she spun straw

Into gold, but she saw

‘Twas but dross that she had been paid in.

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Walking in the Woods — Brief Inventory of What I Saw

Today, while walking The Hod in the woods, I came across:

1. A squashed garter snake in someone’s parking lot, before I reached the woods, and I was sad.
2. A robin, which hopped away.
3. A couple off-trail with a dog on a leash, which woo-woo-sang nervously at Holly, who was off-leash — so, I put Holly back on the leash, a courtesy, for a little while, until we were far from them.
4. A man aiming his camera to shoot autumn leaves on a tall tree, with sunlight filtering through — surely, the best kind of shooting to do in the woods.
5. A man sitting at his easel on a rock off-trail, painting the scene in front of him.
6.  Lots and lots of dappled sunlight filtering through green, and gold, and red and brown leaves
7. Millions of cushiony pine needles on the forest floor.
It’s a beautiful fall day in New England, and the air sparkles.  It’s a good day to be alive, as someone said, somewhere, I don’t recall where, or when.

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